Christine's Corporate Takeover

Made my first attempt at writing a ballbusting story. I don't consider it to be particularly great, but I tried my best! Any constructive criticism is accepted. If response is at least decently positive, I'll write more. It's not letting post the story here, so I wrote it in a Google dock which can be viewed here https://docs.google.com/document/d/15fioLC5MNeD6D3zGg6iRFjs28hF6FSgVYWIvGr_F_kI/

Leave your thoughts & comments below :)