Finder's Fee (a draft, part 1.5?)

This is a rough draft of the like, intro to a story that will be much more involved. \*\*Looking for feedback AND ideas\*\* ***If you ever had a story/scenario pitch that nobody else picked up that involves a dude, his female partner, and a female friend in story where none of the people are evil she-devils... it might be a fit.*** **I've always wanted more stories where a wife/longtime girlfriend is involved in ballbusting to its ultimate end condition but not being fully culpable... so here I am writing one**


Characters: Nina, Frank, Amber, Robert. All characters are well beyond their 20s.


Nina is Amber's longtime friend (originally met at work).
Frank is Nina's husband (and a nonparticipant in the story, he is required for building more on Nina's character).
10 years prior to story, Nina set Amber and Robert up on a date. They really hit it off and just got engaged.


**Contains no actual ballbusting.. yet! I've spared you the background and skipped right to the setup. Of course \*the hottest part\* is** ***what if I never write the next part?*** **See you later** **edge bois!**

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Robert and Amber have a very healthy and happy relationship. No cheating, no secrets, tons of dialogue, both educated earners, domestic bliss on the horizon. No skeletons in their closet. They've spent much time together as a couple, on dates, adventures, and hanging out with their friends, including Nina and Frank.


And so its not a surprise that they recently got engaged! Amber was very excited to tell all her friends, including Nina!


Minutes after she told Nina, Nina called up all excited to chat about the whole thing. The proposal, the romance of the proposal, engagement, plans for a wedding, all that good stuff.


Then Nina asked if Amber was available to hang out the next day for a congratulatory lunch! She invited Amber to her place while Frank was out doing some errands.


The next day, Amber got ready and went to go hang out with Nina. She got a great welcome, they talked some more about how excited they both were, Amber for herself, and Nina for Amber.


However things quickly took a surprising turn!


Nina: "So I really want to again congratulate you! This is so awesome for you! But also... I mean I kind of made this match all those years ago so I think I deserve like a \*lot\* of the credit right? " She said, half jokingly


Amber, chuckling: "Well I did all the dating but you're right I'm so thankful to have had such a great friend who would find someone for me"


Nina: "So actually i was thinking about that. You know, 10 years of happiness, a loving relationship, all the satisfying sex you want from Robert \*assuming you arent lying about that haha\* I think I deserve a finders fee thats at least a little percentage of that happiness I gave you"


Amber, with a cautious but curious tone in her voice: "Oh.. uhhh well what did you have in mind? We'd be happy to do more double dates or take you guys on like a vacation with us as a treat!"


Nina: "That sounds nice, but thats not what I want. This is going to sound a \*lot\* weird to you probably, because its not something you'd ever really know about me and I don't share it, but I need you to know that what I'm going to tell you I want is serious and not a joke okay?"


Amber: "Oh, well you're my friend anyway, you can always share stuff with me. What is it?"


Nina: "I'm not really a huge fan of over explaining myself so i'm just gonna lay it out. For the reason of my sexual enjoyment, I need one of Robert's balls"


Amber looked at her in shock. "You mean like, his bowling ball?" She asked, hoping Nina was actually just being ridiculous.


Nina: "No, If I \*have to get anatomical\* I want you to give me one of his testicles"


Amber didnt have a response.


Nina continued: "Okay I guess I \*have\* to explain. I have a \*thing\* for ... the male weakpoint. Frank knows about that fetish of mine but he has no idea how extreme it is. I've been dreaming since I hit puberty of taking a man's nuts. But it has to be someone I'm close with because the cruelty makes it hotter. I need to know I did it for no reason other than my own pleasure. And I need them to know. And most importantly I need to get away with it. I've always thought of Robert as a potential candidate- the more I knew about him the more appealing it was. Heard through Frank's female work friends that he is extremely well hung too, and that just somehow makes it even better. But he and Frank were too close- I think Robert respected him too much to ever notice my attempts to flirt with him and get him in a compromising situation. So eventually I gave up, and realized Robert might be a good match for you. Honestly I forgot I ever used to think of him that way until you told me you got engaged and I realized that \*silly\* perverted dream was never going to happen.... But then I thought about how you've had six long years of a good relationship with him with more to come.... and maybe its only fair I get my fair share?"


Amber, completely shocked: "I don't know what to say to you. I... if you have such strong perversions why aren't you just solving for these within your marriage? Why the fuck would you need something from my man? What the fuck is wrong with you?!"


Nina: "Frank is off limits. Need his nuts for babies someday. And even after that, my marriage is important to me. Doing that to him... even if I could get him to agree with me.... I don't think that would pan out."


Amber: "Oh so that makes Robert the perfect substitute? Its not YOUR marriage at stake? I can't believe I didn't know you were such a sociopath."


Nina: "Amber you need to know that this is not easy for me-"


Amber, getting ready to storm off: "Not easy for you? Fuck you, how dare you talk to me about this. How could you?!"


Nina, running to the door and blocking it: "No I mean it, I don't \*want\* to want this. I wish I didn't want this, I like you guys. I love being your close couple friends. That's unfortunately what makes it ideal. It has to be Robert. And think about it this way- I only want one!"



Amber: "Oh yeah, ONLY ONE! ONLY ONE!? Why am I still here. I am going home. We are never speaking again."



Nina: "Hold on you don't think I would have shared all of that with you without some assurances right?"



Amber's heart visibly sank.



Nina: "That's right, this \*is\* going to happen, and you're going to help me. Frank can never find out, and it has to be a surprise to Robert too."



Amber:" Or else what? Why wouldn't I just call the cops? Why wouldnt I just, idk, kill you right now?"



Nina: "Well I don't think this is worth spending the rest of your life in Jail for right? So killing me is off the table. Good luck selling this as a self defense claim."



Amber: "Point still stands, why would I agree to do this? This is just a deeply sick, sexual desire you have. Why me? Why Robert? find someone else."



Nina: "Look if you \*don't\* help me with this, or Frank or Robert hear about it, I can \*guarantee\* that things will be worse. I know that deep down this is one Robert's top fantasy turn-ons, and I know you know that too. If we do this my way - we can make it \*fun\*, you and Robert may have some... interesting... trauma to overcome before your wedding, but ultimately you'll be stronger for it after all. If you \*don't\* help me out here, well I'm basically going to promise you he'll lose both nuts after your wedding day.. and it won't be fun. So the choice is yours: do you want a crazy sexy night ending with a one nut fiancé or do you want to be married to a dude with literally no balls and nothing to show for it?"



Amber's face was frozen in shock and despair. "Oh my god, oh my god." She whispered.



Nina: "Its okay! Like I said, this can be super hot and fun for you. And like you said, you did owe me."



Amber: "Owe you?"



Nina: "Yea, come on! If I hadn't hooked you up with Robert you wouldn't be getting married right now, and you wouldn't be as happy as you are. Now its your chance to help me out, and help Robert have a better time too."



Amber: "Oh is THAT how we're justifying this to ourselves? You want to justify stealing someone's nut by saying they owe you their marriage?"



Nina: "Losing one is not a huge deal. He'll still be plowing you with the same robustness he does today, same level of fertility, maybe just needs a little more rest between the " \*hand gestures\* "mansplosions. Plus I promise that if we do it this way, he's going to be rock hard every time he thinks back on it"



Amber: "You're disgusting. You're fucking disgusting."



Nina: "You know, you don't have to pretend. I've always been able to tell, deep down you have some fantasies too. I know you like power dynamic play and being competitive to a fault. Sure you would never do this to your beloved man, but what if I painted you as the hero of the story who is tragically defeated by Nina in a contest where that one nut was the prize, or maybe you fought valiantly for the better alternative to losing two?"



Amber: "This is... I need to leave. I can't believe any of this. I need time to think"



Nina: "Remember, if you talk to \*anyone\* You'll ruin everything. This has to stay between us, okay? And you've got a choice. Do it my way, or do it my way. Your choice. But you need to tell me now."



Amber was furious but defeated. She wanted to leave and call the police or the FBI or the CIA or something, but she didn't want to be responsible for the consequences that might follow. Who would believe her story anyway?



Nina: "I can see you're conflicted. I think that means you understand you have to agree. That's good - but now we have planning to do"



Amber: "Planning? How are you going to get away with it? And what is my role in this?"



Nina: "We're friends right? I know I've hurt you tremendously by talking about this, but my requirements are simple: I need his nut, I need your help to get it, and it has to be sexual and cruel of me to take it... which is kind of automatic anyway since we're all pretty close.. but I want both you and Robert to have as much fun out of the experience as you can.. so I'll let you take the lead on ironing out the details...but let's take care of that while you're here...."