I'm new to writing and recording Hypno, and I'd love some feedback or tips

Hey everyone. I'm pretty new into writing and recording Hypno and I would just love some honest feedback on my stuff. I really want to improve and get better at this so I would love to know what people think. I've been writing the scripts myself and I really want to improve them but I'm not sure what to do to improve them. Most of my audios are M4F, but I do have one M4A file. they are in my profile because I'm not sure if I can post links or not. Please let me know! Thank you!