Dennis' Dilemma (My First Story)

I have lot of fragments and piece of stories involving a rather vicious fraternity and sorority at Ball State, a school that I know nothing about except that I find the name funny in this context. This piece is more or less the beginning, introducing some characters who recur throughout the various hazing incidents and other ballbusting events. I will probably post more in the future but would appreciate feedback quite a bit.

[https://bullseyebriefs.blogspot.com/2020/08/dennis-dilemma-ball-state-universe-01.html#more](https://bullseyebriefs.blogspot.com/2020/08/dennis-dilemma-ball-state-universe-01.html#more)