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This is the first action scene in a writing project I'm working on. Before I posted a prologue and Dr Josephine Liu's character introduction here, but if you're just here for the ballbusting this scene should stand on its own; if you don't care for exposition the bust happens about half way through. [https://www.reddit.com/r/BallbustingStories/comments/1sbxm42/josephine\_lius\_long\_train\_ride\_t...

I've been working on a larger story in my mind for a while which involves a variety of perspectives on ballbusting and touches on demographic and political history, hopefully in a tasteful and literary way. Rather than giving away the spiciest aspects at first, I thought I'd try to write and share a preliminary vignette to introduce the audience surrogate character, so this is the first draft; apo...